Tekk, you're getting better ... BUT:
1. Perspective. Perspective. Perspective. Yours is very much off right now. You need to draw grids.
2. I keep noticing that your pencil sketches are much better than your digital work. Maybe you should consider drawing the comic on paper, first? I know you don't have a scanner, but is there absolutely no way you can get one or borrow one once a week or scan at a library, Internet cafÃ© or whatever?
Inking by hand is a lot more fun than inking digitally, too!
Also, this is related to point one: Perspective is easier to figure out on paper than on the screen.
3. You need to start working on backgrounds a lot more. I know the current pages take place in another realm where there is no real solid ground or whatever, but you can still vary it. Maybe introduce background characters or strange plants or debris or a random signpost the origin of which no one knows?
4. Keep practising, my man. Oh, and buy an anatomy book. They're a lot of help.